All this strict structure makes me think of the staccato talking EMT on American TV shows like ER.
I find in general handover is more of a conversation and the structure changes depending on the pt.
This is John, now you've gotta watch John he's cheeky aren't you John. Anyway John has a 1 month hx of chest pain on exertion. It hasn't been previously investigated or anything, ahhh, he's then experienced the sudden onset at rest of what he describes as heavy central chest pain radiating to to his R shoulder at about 10 this morning, so about 2 hours ago now. He waited around for a bit before calling us and we've got to him about 45 mins ago, found him to have what sounds like cardiac chest pain and some nausea. He's been haemodynamically stable the whole time, obs unremarkable other than some mild hypertension at 160/85, we've given him 300 of aspirin of course, 2 lots of 300mcg GTN, his pain hasn't changed at all, we've then popped a total of 7.5mg of morph in, and he's now pain free. He's also had 10 of maxolon to good effect. Ah...he doesn't have any cardiac hx and the only other medical hx is diabetes...yep type 2... ahh, and no allergies.
Trauma centre handovers are a bit more formal.
This is 62 year old John. John was the driver of a family sedan that was involved in a high speed head on collision at approximately 1630 this afternoon. There was significant cabin intrusion killing the other two passengers and trapping John so there was about a 40 minute delay for extrication and we found him to have significant blunt injuries to his head, a flail segment, and an open fracture to his L tib fib. He was initially GCS 13, hypotensive at 75 systolic before the extrication and in considerable pain, responsive to 2 L of saline and 45 of morphine. Last pressure was 125/85 at HR 98, Saturating well on 8 litres but he does desaturate quickly without o2 and he's been throwing VEs fairly often. Equal breath sound bilaterally, still GCS 13, No meds, hx or allergies that we've been able to ascertain.
Then come the steady stream of further questions from the trauma team.
We rarely give hospital notification unless people are seriously ill. The last hospital note I gave went: "Ah yes, ______ Hospital, we're about 15 out with an 82 year old male post conscious collapse at 2330, presenting with R sided hemiplegia and dysphasia - ?stroke. He's GCS 15 and hypertensive at 185 over 85. Has a BSL of 3.9 that we're correcting now and unless there's anything further we'll see you in 15."
I don't know that they're perfect, but these are all handovers that I've given, they were well received.