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The book is action adventure--fiction
If you are familiar with remote viewing out of body experience, and programs such as that, this is that in a round-a-bout way.
Some of it begins at Fort Mead, but not this part, it occurs in and around the Hackensack, NJ area.
If you know about the technique of remote viewers, and of the series Psi Op or even the characters in the Matrix, you will get a handle on one of my characters ... that need your help. Or ... she dies.
Some info on Angel…one of the characters
'Angel' Angela Silverfeather is of Native American decent, and in the mid twenties age wise. She has no family that she can remember anyway however; she has special talents in the astral arena ... the ether ... out of your body experience etc
There was a man that she called grandfather, but she does not know if he is a relative or a tribal elder.
He has crossed over (died) and left her several plots of land that the government never got their hands on, and several occupy working silver mines.
I need to know what one could do to save someone in this condition.
They cannot go to the hospital call a doctor or an emergency unit.
The need to do it with only the training a cop would receive and his mother has only the observation skills from voluntary work in a hospital.
What would they need, and what would they do?
Oh, and Spock, is the nickname Cliff's (Spock's) brother gave him
Rough non-edited work
A Rough unedited passage from my novel ... Star Light Star Bright
Driving carefully, out of the city, looping several times around different city blocks, and making sure they were not followed, Frank broke the silence.
"Mom. I cannot go into specifics, but it is far to dangerous for you to stay home, and when Major Bean makes contact I will bring him up to date. Now, here is the other part. Do you remember the girl Angel that went missing at the Institute, the one Spock replaced as number one?"
"I seem to recall that yes, I remember," Barb said not following where Frank was going with this.
"Angel has been helping us ... out there MOM, in the heavens as you like to say. She left her body in a deep meditative state. She made a slow saline drip for nourishment and hydration before rolling out."
"Well mom, she senses her body is dying and she cannot get it back in physical control. She needs outside physical help. She is back in her body but so weak she cannot move physically.
If she dies, she will move on past this space and time, and she is not ready. We are not ready ... we need her."
"We have to save her mom, and I hope that we are not too late, he said while pulling in the driveway of a small cottage in Lyndhurst.
The pair went to the door; Cliff retrieved the key where Angel had hid it.
The odor in the home was not pretty. They hurried in the back bedroom and there, on her bed laid an emaciated Angel--the IV drip exhausted, Frank checked her carotid artery, for life.
"She's alive mom, we have to act quick."
"My God Frank I am not a doctor. Not even a nurse. She needs a hospital now," Barbara said pulling out her new throw away cell phone.
Frank was already busy looking for things they might need.
“We can’t Mom. The institute has all of their bases covered, and then some. We are dealing with Dad’s type of superiors here Mom, they rarely leave loose screws.”
Help would be appreciated so I can move forward.
If you are familiar with remote viewing out of body experience, and programs such as that, this is that in a round-a-bout way.
Some of it begins at Fort Mead, but not this part, it occurs in and around the Hackensack, NJ area.
If you know about the technique of remote viewers, and of the series Psi Op or even the characters in the Matrix, you will get a handle on one of my characters ... that need your help. Or ... she dies.
Some info on Angel…one of the characters
'Angel' Angela Silverfeather is of Native American decent, and in the mid twenties age wise. She has no family that she can remember anyway however; she has special talents in the astral arena ... the ether ... out of your body experience etc
There was a man that she called grandfather, but she does not know if he is a relative or a tribal elder.
He has crossed over (died) and left her several plots of land that the government never got their hands on, and several occupy working silver mines.
I need to know what one could do to save someone in this condition.
They cannot go to the hospital call a doctor or an emergency unit.
The need to do it with only the training a cop would receive and his mother has only the observation skills from voluntary work in a hospital.
What would they need, and what would they do?
Oh, and Spock, is the nickname Cliff's (Spock's) brother gave him
Rough non-edited work
A Rough unedited passage from my novel ... Star Light Star Bright
Driving carefully, out of the city, looping several times around different city blocks, and making sure they were not followed, Frank broke the silence.
"Mom. I cannot go into specifics, but it is far to dangerous for you to stay home, and when Major Bean makes contact I will bring him up to date. Now, here is the other part. Do you remember the girl Angel that went missing at the Institute, the one Spock replaced as number one?"
"I seem to recall that yes, I remember," Barb said not following where Frank was going with this.
"Angel has been helping us ... out there MOM, in the heavens as you like to say. She left her body in a deep meditative state. She made a slow saline drip for nourishment and hydration before rolling out."
"Well mom, she senses her body is dying and she cannot get it back in physical control. She needs outside physical help. She is back in her body but so weak she cannot move physically.
If she dies, she will move on past this space and time, and she is not ready. We are not ready ... we need her."
"We have to save her mom, and I hope that we are not too late, he said while pulling in the driveway of a small cottage in Lyndhurst.
The pair went to the door; Cliff retrieved the key where Angel had hid it.
The odor in the home was not pretty. They hurried in the back bedroom and there, on her bed laid an emaciated Angel--the IV drip exhausted, Frank checked her carotid artery, for life.
"She's alive mom, we have to act quick."
"My God Frank I am not a doctor. Not even a nurse. She needs a hospital now," Barbara said pulling out her new throw away cell phone.
Frank was already busy looking for things they might need.
“We can’t Mom. The institute has all of their bases covered, and then some. We are dealing with Dad’s type of superiors here Mom, they rarely leave loose screws.”
Help would be appreciated so I can move forward.
