Go slow.
Start from the top.
Pt demos, what happened, how they were on your arrival, what you did, how that affected them, final pt assessment.
Very short and simple.
Pretty much what I was gonna say, AJ.
Who: Patient Name, age/sex. It may seem hackneied, but I usually start with "This is Bill Jones, 59"
What/Why: Why I'm at the trauma center: "Restrained driver in a 2 car MVA, with chest pain post airbag deployment"
Where: Brief description of the scene, if applicable. Remember, all the trauma team has to look at is the patient... YOU must paint the picture of the mechanism of injury: "Moderate speed T-bone MVA, Mr. Smith was restrained driver, airbags deployed, struck driver's side of other car head-on.
When: How long ago. Also how long my transport time was.
After you paint the inital picture, then you go though your exam... head to toe, noting issues you found. "(-) LOC, (+) chest pain, 12-lead EKG looks normal, here's a copy, Abdomen soft non-tender, Also complains of 7/10 knee pain, nothing on exam. No other complaints.
What you did for the patient - interventions, their responses, etc.
"Pt has an 18ga Left AC, labs drawn, NSS TKO. Vitals remained stable throughout transport... most recent set of signs is: _____
"Any other questions?"
Does that seem to make sense?