okay so I'm looking for a shocking , exciting thesis statement for my Research Paper on the Dangers of EMT
this is what i wrote to my professor as a thesis statement
These emergency medical technicians(EMTs) and paramedics respond to automobile Crashes, shootings, medical emergencies, hazardous Material incidents and large-scale disasters. However, little is known regarding the risks associated with this Occupation.
and my professor replied back
"It's intriguing to focus on the dangers to the medical caregiver rather than the patients. When you say that "little is known about the risks," though, what do you mean? Why don't we know about the risks? I think you're stumbling toward a thesis, but not quite there yet. You need to make a statement that asserts something not obvious-- something that needs to be researched and proven. Why not go ahead with this general idea of risks to tbe EMT and begin some preliminary research. Then you might be able to find some interesting gem of information that gives you your thesis."
Can someone help me or explain to me , what he means or wants ?
this is what i wrote to my professor as a thesis statement
These emergency medical technicians(EMTs) and paramedics respond to automobile Crashes, shootings, medical emergencies, hazardous Material incidents and large-scale disasters. However, little is known regarding the risks associated with this Occupation.
and my professor replied back
"It's intriguing to focus on the dangers to the medical caregiver rather than the patients. When you say that "little is known about the risks," though, what do you mean? Why don't we know about the risks? I think you're stumbling toward a thesis, but not quite there yet. You need to make a statement that asserts something not obvious-- something that needs to be researched and proven. Why not go ahead with this general idea of risks to tbe EMT and begin some preliminary research. Then you might be able to find some interesting gem of information that gives you your thesis."
Can someone help me or explain to me , what he means or wants ?